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BossShi-AviITamicka Body Eb
byBentybyIZIS
663444

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Zendaya BlackC| ChocolateITamicka MH Ebon
byMsKittaybyCaturrdaybyIZIS
6634991406

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! Basic Burgundy Willah ... Fur . Fall Heels V3
byAcelynbyChicKlassbyUnequal
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Combo Scaler S90Gold NecklaceGwyneth LV Purse French Ombre Na Gold Bracelets  Jenny Gold Eari
byScalerbyNecklacebyArletbySohonabyMissMayabyBalor
499744774664608553

Wow when I first had a glance it looked pretty good to me. I really like the model and the pose, they are apt.

I did find a few things, First of the neck-piece, it seems as if its floating and when I tried it in the shop too it was still floating and disconnected from the back. I do feel that the gold you used for the earings and the neck-piece is darker than the purse and the bracelet. But nothing bothersome, it still looks fine to me.
I do find the quality of the dress a bit questionable. Because as you see the neck of the dress is weird and uneven, and I do not really like how that looks, also the bottom part does look a bit blurry to me.

Lastly, I love the color of the nails you went for the lighter shade adds a contrast to the look, which is lovely. I like the concept behind the look, I am only concerned about the few things I mentioned, but I still think this is passable as you paired it up nicely. Nice Job!^-^

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I have nothing else to say as Rachel already touched on what I would have lol. I think Sohona has similar dresses to that one that is I think a better quality? But in truth, it's been so long since I've been in her shop it might be outdated in present time and not the best. cx

When trying on jewelry and you're planning to wear a jacket of some sort that covers it up around the back or in general, make sure to double-check the outfit with the coat off as well that everything looks good. c:

Overall, the model is gorgeous and the outfit wonderfully made for her, just those things mentioned like Rachel said. But, I see this as being marketable still.

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91.67 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 91.67 % ( A- )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : r4chel1 : Judge          |
|          A- : Knixie  : Judge          |

Note: This submission was approved early;
Despite having just 2 judges, the probability of decline was 3.23 %.

Be careful on using anything that has a brand on it. Chances are the item will be removed and the creator possibly temp banned because of the crackdown against fashion based brands. It's preferable not to use them at all in Sedulity but if you do end up using them, there's a possibility you'll have to replace the item at a later date.