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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

!K Danna.Shikyo no Megami
byKeliebyRoy
388664

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

S ! Megan Black EmbersSCARLA Eyebrow+E
bySahaanibyAkyobylH20l
6486661318

Clothes

TopShoes

F - BaroccoCHN Heels V2
byFromelbyALAIA
1000521

Accessories

PursesScalerFace PaintGlovesHair accesorieSpice Glasses

^D^gold clutchCombo Scaler S90 Wendy Lashes! Heart Breaker.$ Flower crown D$ Ampersand GOLD
bydienettbyScalerbySeoulbyPreybyMissCbyMissC
532499527686550499

I like what you did here. The only thing that I would watch out for is the toenails on the shoes are gold, and you have black nails. Usually, you want to try and keep those two the same color. I struggle with this as well since toenails come from the shoe. The best way I find to work around it is to use a closed-toe shoe. I also would have chosen a more realistic eye color, but that could be my preference. Overall you did well, in my opinion.

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This is a unique submission! I do agree with having natural eyes here, but it is a personal preference and the ones you used aren't bad. They still go well with the outfit. Also, great work on listen to the critiques in the original submission by adding a clutch! Though I will say, I'm not a fan of this head/skin combo with the outfit. However, since it wasn't mentioned in the original critique, I will not dock points for it. And I do wish you kept the same style of the hair in the original submission since that is also what made this outfit so unique. The one you used here looks like it could have been used in a more natural submission with a more tanner head and skin combo, than the one you have on now. So it slightly feels out of place.

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I feel like Ciara and Purfection mentioned it all and I agree with them.


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