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Description: I changed the hair and top as was suggested.

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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Wal Drv`, YZARC Req II
byFoljinbyHydrah
443883

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

AlanN' Perfect Eyebr. Hazel.Kyle
byChocoBotbyEZTbySindrobyZeur
664443443880

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

 ALmosh Denim Ripped.Black Slip On Sh
byHuvusbyRatersbywBlackWolfw
609608609

Accessories

New Acces.Ear PlugsGloves

ICO Dainty Hand Small PlugsPerfect Hands
byLOLby2facebyroseNwater
600714391

This looks better, well done! It feels a tad bit bland though.

I'm not sure what grade to put on this so I will hold off until I've seen what other judges think.


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Yess! I really do like this look so much more than the original. And you actually matched everything sooo well!! So good job on that.

But as Tekanna said this look does look a bit bland, what I would suggest is, in looks like these you can add your own touch by maybe adding a hand band since the hands are bare or maybe some casual sunglasses would also have looked great and add so much more to the look.

But overall well done. I am surprised how the head and skin also look really similar but soo much better. I like it ^^

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I really like this as a casual dude outfit. Great improvements all around! Something on the wrist wouldn't have hurt but I don't think it's lacking too much.

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