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Description: Edit: Changed avater because I realised previous one made feet look weird










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

SassyC | Aiko
byJatebyEyeCandiFem
399695

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Carlene rust Eyebrows .Black CLR Light HazelKD^RAIKA HEAD
byJavabyAvielbyShivabykloudust
663750499877

Clothes

TopShoes

Clarissa Boho Bi  Foot Tattoo.
byPearla711byExzy
598554

Accessories

ScalerEarringsBraceletsDainty HandsFacial JewelryAnklets

Combo Scaler S85( Fierce Earring~E- Daya Cuff Le*G Gold Dust Wom$ Gold Nose Ring( single heart a
byScalerbyMarthabyEllohymbyTheGreenGoddebyEssmebyMartha
448664690664554642

While the pattern on the bikini is beautiful, the textureless straps throw me off and seem more metallic than actual fabric. I also find the tassels at the end of the straps to be quite lacking with texture too; almost a solid if not for the ombre they portray. I'm not sure if it's my monitor but the bracelet comes off as bronze, and it throws me off in accordance with the metallic looking nails and golden anklet, and nose ring, that you have on.
I find the right foot to be quite cluttered with the added tattoo; Maybe swap feet for the tattoo or the anklet so it doesn't look as messy.
I love how fresh faced she looks with the littlest amount of makeup so it doesn't appear too harsh. The hair, because of the colours and style, comes off as wet to me and I also like that little feature since this is swimwear!

B+

I agree with Valeer about the feet and accessories. They don't really feel consistent or cohesive in color or theme/style. The swimsuit seems okay and I like the more "boho" approach I assume you were gunning for. But I agree that the straps do appear a little more metallic; I'm sure it's just the lighting that Pearla opted for, but it makes you second guess if gold or silver would match this more. Bronze is a hard metal to match or find on imvu, at least for me, so hopefully, you can fix the accessories pretty easily. Lastly, I think the shoulders are a bit small, so 90% would be better. Otherwise, I also really like the model (as usual) and the hair.
I did try this on in shop to grade, but client quit on me towards the end. x

B+

even tho i adore that skin/head combo i have to agree, the bikini print it self seems so flat and the laces dont really feel like fabric, a little adjustment would do

B+

I agree with the above.
The feet need to b e changed, and the avatar too, is causing unnecessary glitching, with the shoulders and with the hands going through her hips.
Since the quality of the bikini isn't the great ever, you really need to fix these things to make the outfit work.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Valeer   : 1098           |
|          B+ : iMoo     : Judge          |
|          B+ : tetso808 : Judge          |
|          B+ : llChana  : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1098.

Resub Granted

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Description: I'm never doing another ethnic/boho outfit in my life. I admit defeat. I hope the duplicate is ok, the corresponding outfit is totally different and shoes dont even show. Finding accessories was really a pain so I lowkey ended up matching the shoes to the earrings(yes by the same developer -cries-). I also discarded the nose ring because I couldn't find one to match the gold tone.Overall a pain.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

[SIN]  Aurora StC | Aiko
bySinderellabyEyeCandiFem
698695

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Carlene rust Eyebrows .Black CLR Light HazelKD^RAIKA HEAD
byJavabyAvielbyShivabykloudust
663750499877

Clothes

TopTop1 Duplicate

Clarissa Boho BiClarissa Boho LR~E- Daya Sandals
byPearla711byPearla711byEllohym
598583664

Accessories

ScalerEarringsDainty Hands

Combo Scaler S85~E- Daya Earring*G Gold Dust Wom
byScalerbyEllohymbyTheGreenGodde
448718664

I feel awful that you had such a rough time with the resub. But I think you've succeeded in improving this overall. The straps are mostly hidden and the jacket obviously matches. I can get over the duplicate and I'm pretty glad to see colors matching throughout.

A

i love this , you took your weakness and turned it into your strength the outfit as a whole is eye-pleasing the color matches perfectly , my only concern that i dont know if this considered a bundle or not , since you have put on 2 tops "technically"

so i will leave my grade for now as an


A