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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

 REQ - Hyzze . Khloe - valent
byemerraldbyZephyr
1092550

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

dup. Gav Blacks. brows LD | brSelene-Mortal. Zephyrus HD he
byDuplicatebySilencebyRoybyZephyr
6614993991500

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

dup. s a dD. Under Jeans Rdup. nUb Yellow
byDuplicatebyiDezzBanksbyDuplicate
598664631

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerGlovesChokersActions

Leg Thigh ScalerCombo Scaler S90Feet ScalerHands Small Blac( choker BABYGIRT Cute Anyskin E
byScalerbyScalerbyDuplicatebylH20lbyMarthabySoochi
419448465499598645

Spice GlassesSkins & Tattoo

dup. Cloutdup. Net RLL
byDuplicatebyDuplicate
598598

This is a very cute, unique outfit but I feel like it has some cleaning up to do. The checkered glasses and the stripped shirt really clash since they’re two different patterns. Some solid white or black glasses would’ve been better. I’m also not a huge fan of the hairstyle for this outfit or the head/skin combo. The bangs are framing her face in an odd way.

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I agree with Jaunty. The sunglasses hover noticeably too. It might just be my screen, but I don't see a whole lot of texture on the hair; at least, not a lot of shine. But I do like the playfulness of the outfit and the colors.
Edit: I would also recommend scaling up the hands to at least 65%. We typically don't scale our arms and keep shoulders at 90-95%. I don't think anything but the hands are really noticeable here because the rest of her body is pretty thin, though. Just keep those standard scalers in mind for future submissions.

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This is so cute and unique! I tried this on and taking off the scalers looked super weird. She had big ol shoulders...yikes. So I think you used the scalers well. And her hands seem perfect to me. The hair could be more textured which is my only issue.

Nice!!!

Edit: I just noticed the hovering sunglasses. Maybe a bigger hair would take that away?

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I agree with Laney- trying on outfits and working with or without scalers- makes a huge difference in how your outfit looks. I ALWAYS recommend trying it on so you can zoom in, and judge it more clearly!

I agree about the hair, as well, it looks very flat and just there. I'd like to see a more realistic shine to is, since her face is GORGEOUS and very real looking. I really do not have any other complaints. You did well!

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This had Submision vs Submission thats why the bot didnt grade it. I am renaming