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Description: Edit: Found a better hat










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Raven Still v.1demo skin
bySinderellabyMoonrise
698400

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HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Brunnie Alberfa 25 K. Lightmm. Jewel. Grey.s| Allie Head . 
bylDBbyqubbyMissMayabyScarling
660664499998

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Evia OutfitMallorca boots
byWhimsbyDyerGold
598631

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NecklacesNecklacesScalerHatsActionsDainty Hands

-die- Simple nec~E- Adele NecklaCombo Scaler S90Roadhouse CowboyCombo Scale H110A* henna
bySahbaAntarbyEllohymbyScalerbyHeavensentbyScalerbyAnimo
509663448785448609

RingsBracelets

~E- Adele Ring!D! Ashley Brace
byEllohymbyDemoniqMagix
663581

Never mix the metal tones such as gold, bronze or etc. (The brace had gold on it while the necklace and ring are different tone).
It would be nice if you were wearing some dream catcher necklace so it can get along with its tattoos, but it's minor tho.
Watch out for the glitches, the hair glitches into the hat and necklace.
Somehow, there's something fishy about the outfit, but I can't see why so it's passable from myself.

A-

I do agree with Dreta everything except the outfit because I think it's fine.

A-

I don't care for the quality of the hat, here. The shading isn't so great, and the pattern on the fabric is a bit awkward, and doesn't really go along with the clearly more fashionable (as opposed to practical) look of this outfit.

It also doesn't really work, for me, personally, to have the dark grey outfit, but the brown hat and boots. The colors just do not all work, together. As I said - this is a fashionable, rather than functional. So making things fit nicely, rather than just saying, "This is all Western, so here," is probably the best course to go about.

The metals thing actually doesn't really bother me, simply because the "metal" detail on the cuff is so minute, and I don't think it's practical to ask everyone who has a tattoo to always wear accessories that incorporate their tattoos into their outfits.

The accessories that were chosen, however, do not fit this. A cowgirl wearing a light, obviously summer outfit with snowflake accessories just seems a little odd, to me. It doesn't mesh with the rest of it.

I also think that black nails don't work with this - so the tattoo/nail accessory should go in favor of something more suited, either color wise, or maybe a nice french manicure. If you manage to find another tattoo product, as long as it suits, then fine, but the outfit would work fine, without.

I just think that, while most of the individual items are fine, this isn't well put-together.

B+

I had a lot of trouble figuring out what it was bothering me about the outfit and I think that Sin nailed it. Thank you^
Needless to say, I agree with her critique. Good luck with the resub, though!

B+

I completely agree with SinHaven. Looking forward to see you re-resubmitting this.

B+

B+
89.5 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 89.44 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : Dreta    : Judge          |
|          A- : Xetaaa   : 1188           |
|          B+ : SinHaven : 1835           |
|          B+ : iMoo     : Judge          |
|          B+ : Pjush    : Judge          |

Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 89.64 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1512.

Resub Granted

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Description: Smol silver detail on necklace, smol silver rings on feet and gold accessories. I thought the necklace's stone matched too well with the armbands, and the shoes matched well with the dress. Overall -as expected- accessorizing gave me paihn. I guess this is boho, even though it's the kind of outfit you'd expect on an oriental fusion dancer ^^'''










Avatars & Skin

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 Selfie.demo skin
byBalorbyMoonrise
663400

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Aveida black 25 K. Lightmm. Jewel. Grey.s| Allie Head . 
byJavabyqubbyMissMayabyScarling
661664499998

Clothes

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Evia Outfit~E- Elvie Sandal
byWhimsbyEllohym
598664

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ScalerNecklacesActionsDainty HandsArmbandsBracelets

Combo Scaler S90~E- Mana Short NCombo Scale H110INails ChocolateEris Arm CuffsGold No Glow Ban
byScalerbyEllohymbyScalerbyIZISbyAhndantebyLyfeThyme
448691448719686690

This is a good improvement compared to the original submission. I like the new hairstyle you went for and the new accessories feel more cohesive.

A

Oo this is looking pretty good! I love the updates that you've made

A