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Description: Submission 2 - Fantasy










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

VIOLETT Tall. Naomi - cutthr
bySinderellabyZephyr
2753647

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

[Is] Usha PurpleP|Hana BrowsC| Sky Jane Head.
byIsmenybyllPrissyllbyCaturrdaybyJeeth
663609499987

Clothes

TopShoes

[Is] Twilight Pr! Purple Silver 
byIsmenybyAmiCat
774598

Accessories

ActionsHornsCollarsHair FlowerGlovesMiscellaneous

!S! Hand ResizerDow Queen Elf Co!V! Agertha v2 C[Is] Lace Rose PS* Shiro UnsteadA| Ryra Shoulder
bySandyzPassionbySpacieStacybyVinylDollzbyIsmenybyShiroi001byAkisa
598664647576592554

I know bundle rules can be a little confusing at first, but hair can be a replacement for shoes. So if you don't want this as a bundle, you should be using hair by another developer. But if you wanted to keep it as a bundle, you'll need one more product by Ismeny. Doesn't matter what it is, just as long as you have the three clothing products (top & bottoms or dress, plus shoes or hair) and two extras. So, unfortunately, this breaks a rule!

I would also like to point out that it's a little random that the choker has victorian print on it while nothing else does. 80% for the hands is also a little big, so maybe scale them down to 70-75%. We also recommend 90-95% for shoulders so they don't look too broad. And, of course, you know my feelings about tall avatars.

F

F
50 %


1 judge have voted, the judge average was 50 % ( F )

Grading Breakdown:

|          F  : iMoo : Judge          |

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Description:










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

VIOLETT. Naomi - cutthr
bySinderellabyZephyr
2753647

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

[Is] Usha PurpleP|Hana BrowsC| Sky Jane Head.
byIsmenybyllPrissyllbyCaturrdaybyJeeth
663609499987

Clothes

TopShoes

[Is] Twilight Pr[Is] Kylie Heels
byIsmenybyIsmeny
774554

Accessories

NecklacesActionsHornsHair FlowerFace PaintGloves

PVC Wrap Collar[L]Perfect HandsDow Queen Elf Co[Is] Lace Rose P[Is] Allie ShadoS* Shiro Unstead
bySirenaRogabyLKSbySpacieStacybyIsmenybyIsmenybyShiroi001
631448664576581592

Miscellaneous

A| Ryra Shoulder
byAkisa
554

You forgot to add the [Bundle] tag to your submission title.
This is a nice bundle.
The shoulders look a bit broad, some shoulder scalers (90-95%) would have fixed that.
The red lips are a bit random, since anything in the rest of the outfit is red.
And, although the spikes are a nice addition, they go through the dress.

A-

You forgot to add the [Bundle] tag to your submission title.
This is a nice bundle.
The shoulders look a bit broad, some shoulder scalers (90-95%) would have fixed that.
The red lips are a bit random, since anything in the rest of the outfit is red.
And, although the spikes are a nice addition, they go through the dress.

A-

A-
91.67 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 91.67 % ( A- )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : llChana : Judge          |

Note: This submission was approved early;
Despite having just 2 judges, the probability of decline was 2.7 %.

Thank you for your constructive comments Sorry for the shoulders, not the first time im being told about xP, i'll pay more attention next time. As for the lips, I wanted to make a "vilain" character, the reason why i kept them red... or maybe a dark lipstick would have worked out. Thanks again!