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Description: On a summer day going to the bar with the boys and just put on something chill and a little fancy










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin BADDEK.G` Kyros II.ReqbyBalorbyGossamer663750

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHeadWaves W. Taperr Natural Eyebro Winter Eyes.! H I P S T E R bySphinxbyRatersbyRatersbyPics553443443987

Clothes

TopBottomShoesJean Shirt BlackL'C - Jeans blacL'C Air Jordan 1byTupibyNevesTbyNevesT553553520

Accessories

ScalerScalerActionsActionsEarrings1st True New HAvatar Scaler 12Shoulder Scaler Hands Resizer*Kc*Bling left rLebeau 24K Gld S Full Body LightbyScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyKaccbyChicSephorabySSG419448698500630554NecklacesWatchesNew Acces.Gloves Christo Redento*Kc*Bling watch+!hiq! WAR REPORT[/size]
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In future submissions, you need to ensure you're spelling the title right. Otherwise, the bot will miss it or it'll cause problems for those of us who have to post the final grade. I'll fix it for you this time.
If you've read the rules, you need to show us... And ensure that you're including at least one full body screenshot. I'll do my part and try this on in shop, though.

Regarding the outfit, I think this is a pretty good first submission. My biggest complaint is the pants...mostly because they're dark enough that it's hard to see a whole lot of texture, plus the detailing on them is really fuzzy/blurry.
And in the future, you won't need to include body/face light products. They're unnecessary and just add to the cost without contributing anything to the outfit. We generally don't include body/avi scalers in our submissions much anymore, but I don't think they "hurt" either. Just don't make the avi so large that it's too big for the preview boxes on the website.
All that being said, happy submitting!

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Like Moo said the quality of the pants isn't the best, specially the details on the back.
Watch out for unnecessary products, like the lights and avatar scalers.
This is a nice first submission, though.

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I agree with all the above. Nice first submission.

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