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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Sokemot v2 ~Deri Antoinette N6
byFrezebyShicuki
444598

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

|Ralipso Brownq.21 K. Black BrC| Sky//Lila V1\\
byMrsKittybyqubbyCaturrdaybyFrightful
663499499999

Clothes

TopShoes

.A; ArcticOwl Real Kicks C
byArcticbyewu
620610

Accessories

Dainty HandsScalerMiscellaneousVarious Masque

.Cst: Oil (shortShoulder Scaler`BB` 65% Hand Sc+ face freckles
byDashingbyalvin73byB1TCHYbyCasual
698696390462

Edited 235 time(s). Last edit at 01/14/2017 03:44PM by iMoo.

The avatar's slouched shoulders make her head look too big, to me. I think a larger shoulder scaler would have been a good idea for this particular avatar.

I also think the lace at the top of the stockings is a bit out-of-place. I know it's part of the overall outfit, and that "Hipster" often means it's a bit of a hodgepodge of different looks, but in this case, I think it's just too out-there for the rest of the look.

But my biggest complaint is that this NEEDS accessories. A bracelet, a beanie, a big coat over the outfit... SOMETHING. I actually don't totally think that this is "hipster" BECAUSE it's lacking accessories and the outfit could honestly go in any direction depending on what you add to it...

I just think this needs more work, really.

B+

I really like the head/skin combo; it's super pretty. But I also agree with Sin for the most part. The stockings will have to be overlooked, though, since they can't be changed or removed. Just know that it's really important to accessorize and make the outfit look as finished as possible! Even casual outfits don't go without some sort of accessory, usually.

B+

Agree with the above.

B+

Everything has been said

B+

B+
88.33 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : SinHaven  : 1806           |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Ajak      : 1498           |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |

Note: This submission was declined early;
Despite having just 2 judges, there were 4 B+ grades.

2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1652.

Resub Granted

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Description: For my resub I changed her hair to a different style. Added Bracelets and black studs. I also added a tied plaid shirt around her waist. Changed the shoulder scaler to 95%










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Yes?... Antoinette N6
byZeurbyShicuki
445598

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Kensi Smokeq.21 K. Black BrC| Sky//Lila V1\\
byDrollbyqubbyCaturrdaybyFrightful
663499499999

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

.A; ArcticAls! Plaided WaiOwl Real Kicks C
byArcticbyAlikbyewu
620707610

Accessories

ScalerEarringsBraceletsDainty HandsMiscellaneousVarious Masque

Shoulder Scaler Black StudsR| Lost Mind Bra.Cst: Oil (short`BB` 65% Hand Sc+ face freckles
byScalerbyoooooKarenbyRozeRuinbyDashingbyB1TCHYbyCasual
448625690698390462

I think this looks a lot better.

A

No issues.

A