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Description: Another Sci-Fi, for the roleplay suggestion I suppose.

i had the option to add dark grey roses with silver spikes on the shoulders, but I kinda like it like this, it's more ladylike. I know the shoes are duplicates, but I wanted to use this mesh and needed something well textured, and would make sense to be under her dress because she's a bit of a fighter, and not the "oh i can't run in these heels" type lol... I don't really like some of the bands that are wrapped around the horns, but... m'eh, I think this is also a new mesh.

Not a bundle since it's just the dress and some accessories made by the same dev, right?

i love this dress though xp Was a real pain in the butt to find an avi that didn't make the staffs headglow disappear, though it would have been nice to find one that wasn't smiling, makes her feel a bit like a puppet sometimes xp

Looking forward to the grades xp


Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

[SIN] Tia Still [AS] Shunasassi 
bySinderellabyAnnaSassin
698665

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

!!ChloeMoretz6Fa*POOF!Invisible M; Coal Eyes Uni!DB Kiseal Head 
byModaRossoVivobyFearcebyMitsuibyDiamondBones
661359445665

Clothes

Top1 Duplicate

!!DQGownBluBlk(DW) HWN15 DOS H
byModaRossoVivobyDelureWear
1021691

Accessories

EyeLashesEyeLashesEyeLashesScalerHornsMedieval Weapo

DCUK HighDrama T[k] Lashes ~pest!Msi! Eyelashes Combo Scaler S95Demon Queen HornMagic Scepter
byExpoDuckbyK4LOobyMsibyScalerbySirenaRogabyOzu
675695565448664650

RingsRingsCloakHeaddressesGloves

~Sapphire Ring~LBaroque Ring Rig!!DQDrapeBlue!!DQCrownSilver! L! Ice Bird Ha
byMelodyDeathWybyGabrielleVikibyModaRossoVivobyModaRossoVivobyLeilo
504580754779636

This is a bundle. You have hair, dress, and two accessories all by the same dev. The rules for bundles are very clear

8) Bundle outfits must have all clothing items by the same developer. Alternatively, you may switch out shoes for hair.
9) Bundle outfits must have 2 additional items by the same developer that are separate from the 3 used in rule 8.

I'm changing your title now.

shit.... it's gonna fail lol ok, i might as well look to fix it now as I wait for the resub permission

You really need to get yourself sorted on what a bundle is, it's been explained to you multiple times.

It doesn't fail any rules, but the head/skin combo is totally killing this for me. Almost everything BUT that is perfect imo.
I think this would be better with a human head. She could be a demon or w/e you intended, but this head is just not working at all. The skin was intended for a normal head anyway. This one is too round and stretches the face out a little too much, really.
You also have way too many lashes on. Just do the default lashes on the head, or opt for a lashless head and look for some layerable MEANT for that head.

B+

hm, interesting,

I used extra lashes because I couldn't find an eyelash mesh that was long enough, so I layered the lashes to fill in the empty gaps, and added the outwards 3rd one to at least try to give the bottom lashes a little attention at the outer corners if any.

And I know I could have used a human flat face for this, but I use to wear this with a muzzle because it made it look more alien-like, as it was one of the only humanoid-skins I found that looked nice with a muzzle because it doesn't have a strong shadow outlining the bottom of the nose, like most good dragon skins, so it helps accentuate muzzles on skins that don't have the indent below the nose... But if this muzzle doesn't flatter the details on the face, then I'll accept that it's a no go, because one of the whole points of this model I chose was because of the head/skin combo.

No one has mentioned yet that this bundle is lacking another 2 items made by the same dev who is not part of the original bundle matching set. Can the clothing (not head/skin) pass by anyways because the dress already has it's own necklace built onto it, and maybe adding a bracelet would be over doing it because the sleeves are already long and tailored?

You have hair+the dress, that makes the main parts of the bundle. Then you have two more accessories by the same dev. The other devs don't matter. If you have hair/top/bottom+two more items by the same dev, or if you have top/bottom/shoes+two more items by the same dev, it makes a bundle. The other devs don't matter. These 4 items make this a bundle and it will be uploaded to the site under her name:

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Yeah, but the makeup doesn't look good on the head, it's not just the "nose" alone that bothers me. But I gave it a B+ because it'd be easy to overrule in the first place, if others disagree.

hm, okie imoo

So when submitting a bundle, it actually doesn't matter about how many items are by other devs in the same outfit, as long as there is one devs name repeated 4 or 5 times. ok good, that's so much more simpler than what I originally thought xp

Basically the main items is what determines the dev for which the bundle is for. I have to agree with iMoo on everything, this is an interesting concept I just feel like that face would look better on a morphed body instead of such humanly proportions, like a bigger head, egg shaped or something. Lol This is definitely not my strong-suit even though I watch a bit of sci-fi, I just feel like the only thing Sci-fi is the face and staff.

B+

I agree with iMoo. This is an awesome outfit, but the head-skin combination was really not the best idea.

B+