Sedulity

August 8, 2014, 6:12 pm

This is my first post here so sorry if I screwed something up.

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Avatars & Skin

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TF Spicy Avatar *D Snow White Sk
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Head & Face

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    Katelin     [K] Red Eyebrowsn: sprite blue /
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Clothes

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() Off-Black Cam[MT] Honey.Short[N] Start Anew .
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Accessories

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Black Nails SmalKIKI|SilverLiqui
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Choa

August 8, 2014, 6:21 pm

Ah yay congrats on first post xD

I like this hair style and it looks nice with the lip color. However, the brows are a bit too thin and high up since you're using a more doll like head. I suggest using accessory brows. I think the tank top is great though. The shorts are cute but not so much in this outfit, they don't really match anything and clash with the red hair and lips. I suggest finding a pair of neutral color jean shorts. Also I'm not so sold on the shoes, the tank top and short say casual but the shoes say dinner party. I think a nice casual shoe style would work much better here. Last note, your avi hands are a bit large. A 75% scaler could make them look more proportional and nice. o;

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