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Description: Gothic, High Fashion.

Nice combination from a variety of developers and it all has harmony. I like this outfit a lot but I don't like black lipstick, never have. I would like to see the lipstick changed maybe to a dark red or even bright red to make them pop and stand out as a focal point.

I would like to see other peoples opinion on the lipstick with this outfit.

I still give this an A.

I defintely agree about the lipstick. THe black is making it duller and not really exciting. I adore the dress! and i love those shoes, i have them myself


Change the lipstick defintely and this will be stunning!



A

We are awaiting a re submission, so I am keeping this one open. If we get another A from a judge I will just approve the black lipstick version.

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Description: Edited the lipstick(skintone).









Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

TF Selena Avatar-tgm-Bullets & E
byTheCelebrbythegangst
931488

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

✄  Braxton Bla*D™Sharpie Eye[BC] Reckless | !S! Kelly Head
byNevoirbyDollfiebyBlackCatbySirenize
636664400749

Clothes

TopShoes

[FC]Lace.Black[c] Solace Lace 
byFCsusanbyCAL
682565

Accessories

Yumi Wonder BoGlovesEyeLashes

Yumi Wonder Bow (FG) Lush Lace G[M] RnG Makeup S
byLioraeSaeihrbyShellbbyMissMaya
719675666

A now. Thanks

This look is super cute.

The lace bow and gloves are a wonderful addition and accessories to your outfit.
I'm also loving the lace high heels.

I'm not sure about the head making the lips a bit too..botox-y.

I do love the smokey eye look your skin has, along with the tone of your skin.

The hair is lovely and frames the face nicely.

Your resubmission is pretty much ace with me, aside from the head I absolutely adore it.

Rating: A+

Please be in mind that a "goth" look is not only all black. Dark colors such as red, purple, and occasionally pink may be used as well. Since you were only focused on the black I would have suggested a bit of an edgy twist, I do not see the High Fashion in this style. You could have utilized a bit more accessories in this look. I do like the hair and the skin color.

In all I find this pretty Blah, but it was a nice effort. Grade C+

3 out of 7 judges have voted, the average was 96.33 % ( A )

Note: 1 negative member review was taken into consideration to help speed up the review process.
Their contributions rendered the final average as 94.92 ( A )